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| Double G 2007-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseGreat! |
| StarMajesty 2001-07-21 ch 1, | abuseCorrect-o-mundo about the no plot thing. But still, you wrote VERY nice. |
| Samantha 2001-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was an interesting fic, though it feels incomplete. It needs a conclusion. You write well and I liked, for the most part, what you had. The only thing that I didn't like was the way that you had Usagi get over the death/murder so quickly once she discovered that the woman had leukemia. That's like saying that someone who has a terminal illness's life has no value, which isn't true. And she didn't necessarily save that person from a lot of suffering. I coulg go on, but this isn't really the place for a moral debate. Other than that, great story. |
| EmpressGalaxia 2001-01-08 ch 1, | abuseSniff. I don't care if it didn't have a plot, it was sweet! Sniff sniff >^..^ |
| Alicia Y. 2001-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this. mew and it was very well-written and i think it had a plot |
| Aleah 2001-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really loved your story! It was written very well! I love reading stories dealing more with Usagi's serious side, then the more cliched, ditzy/clutzy side. Keep on writing! |