Once again I must complement you on an excellent piece of work,
Sirius's proclamation of if he could help Moony in any way he would; only fitting of course.
"The night is ours, and the forest too; they’ll welcome us again." I love the way you show that the night and forest are almost beings rather than a geographical place.
I have to pick my favorite line, “Prongs, this is in your memory, too; the past isn’t forgotten. We see
The intangible phantoms of our childhood selves running with us, but don’t flee." It just pulls at your heartstrings; Sirius thinking back and making sure that Prongs is not forgotten and how their childhood phantoms run with them.
"Canine howls in harmony with lupine, sounds pleasant" Reading this I can almost hear it, the sound of a full moon night.
"But in the moonlight, I can see your heart’s smile;
For now, there is peace, if just for a while." and that just makes you feel good.
Again, I can not pinpoint what makes your stories so different yet so similar that I am unable to pick a favorite.
Beautifully done, as always,
Mrs. Fawkes

again...very, very nice. I liked. I loved in fact. I most def like you style.

I have never read Bohemian Rhapsody so I have no idea if these two are at all connected but I really like the manner you adressed it all, Sirius preception and understanding of Remus and his pain, but also the release and the enjoyment he had as Moony.

Really liked that...prolly got the totally wrong end of the stick with all these poems, but none the less..I am not a brilliant reviewer. But I am sincere. I liked them very very much. Tell me if there's anything new out.
kangaroo

I like this! Padfoot's thoughts on Moony are wonderful!! I've read a lot poems, but this one's wonderful. Padfoot's and Moony's flight into the forest is great!