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Reviews For: Midwinter Waking
Seretocarlo 2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Hope was growing thin. I had been looking for a decently-written story for -days-. Just when I had almost given in, I found this and realized--some people still know how not to brutalize characters and write with a pencil instead of a sledgehammer. It's nice and quiet and reflective.

And, incidentally, the right length.

Do you think titles are hard to choose? I do. It's difficult to find a balance between "terrible" and "cheesy." I think this one is "okay."
spoons are for marmalade skies 2005-12-06 . chapter 1
i've never really liked harry/cho, but this is really good. i like how you make your own plots your own, and still keep them all in character.
Lactuca 2005-02-21 . chapter 1
People come down awful ** Cho a lot of the time. She was a bit wet, but Harry didn’t give her much to work with. I like seeing a more charitable Cho picture, and you have done it exceptionally well.
cute 2004-06-26 . chapter 1
harry likes asian girls, right? well, he should. asian girls are cool
SomniumSeeker 2004-01-19 . chapter 1
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Oh, and did I mention brilliant! This fic was wonderful. It was poignant and stirring, poetic and flowing. And sweet. Sweet without being fluffy. It was real. You wrote it in such a way that I could read it fluently, without bumping along on awkward sentences. But a flaw? It was short! Too short! Okay, so maybe that's not a flaw, but it certainly miffed me a bit. Your writing style left me wanting so much more; it pulled me in and connected with me. I never wanted it to end, and I even found myself eyeing the scroll bar warily, dreading when it reached the bottom. And yet, I can't bring myself to ask you to write more. Because if you wrote more, I just feel like it would potentially take away from the...dare I say magic of the piece. And perhaps you felt the same. But regardless, I absolutely loved your story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us!
LogicalRaven 2004-01-19 . chapter 1
Are you going to continue?
indigal 2004-01-18 . chapter 1
hmm...are you going to continue this? i hope you are because you have a very nice style of writing..sort of a laid back enigmatic feel to it. how the silence shared turns into an understanding--profound really.
anyway...i would like to see how this development evolves.
thanks for a wonderful read!
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