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Reviews For: NSX

The Ansem Man 2008-05-14 ch 8,	abuseAmazing, would read again. The transition from Bowser's nervous wreck into the heroically insane man he was last chapter felt nice. Power usurping and the political background is a nice touch to this story. I have to wonder what this NSX seeks to accomplish and why. But still, Epic Hero!Bowser is still win.
Ud the Imp 2008-05-14 ch 8,	abuseYeah, DEFINITELY suspicious about this NSX group. Just how much of the Vast DO they know about... Wow. The Vast basically just altered the ENTIRE FREAKIN' Mario - verse timeline! O_o This is basically the story of how Bowser gained his Keyblade. And just goes to show that no matter how big and bad the obvious ruler is, there's STILL some dumb sap wishing to usurp power... As always, the fight scenes are amazing, though in this case it was one sided. In favor of BOWSER! XD Can't wait for the next one, another profile or more story either way!
The Ansem Man 2008-01-24 ch 7,	abuseOh boy! I return a couple of years later to see factions, plot twists and even EPIC GOOD GUY!Bowser. Wow, you really know how to lay down a story! Try not to introduce too many things at once lest your audience's brains explode...
Rakumel 2008-01-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseDude! I'm so glad to see you're still writing. (I don't know if you remember me, it's been ages - I used to go by Rakugo Lady. That name's pretty much dead now.) Anyhow, this is shaping up to be an excellent take on Kingdom Hearts. A more interesting one, at any rate. I like that bit of attitude Troy has, I think he's gonna turn out awesome in the end. Nice to see the Princess and Luigi in action too - I always had kind of a soft spot for Luigi. It just had to suck, being in his brother's shadow all the time. ahem And Auron's playing a major role in it all! Instant win. Hope you keep working on this - I'm very curious to see where it's going. Coincidentally, the music I'm listening to now? It's by VAST. =p
Ud the Imp 2008-01-03 ch 7,	abuseMore and more information is being revealed in this chapter. Though we still don't know the full capabilities of the Vast, or even what it is, we do know the relationship they have with the Heartless and the Nobodies. And it seems that Auron is becoming more and more of what Sirius was SUPPOSED to be: Troy's mentor. Sirius was obviously an agent of some proganda spewing organization that wanted stability through secrecy and normalicy, while Auron truly wants to help while exploring the secrets of the universe. Lots of plot twists, lots of action, lots of excitement! The only downer is that the stream of new info coming in is confusing me sonething fierce. Keep it coming!
Ud the Imp 2007-06-04 ch 6,	abusePeach is taking the initiative. Seems Sirius has been reduced from a wise sage to raving conspirator. The type who knows far more than he lets on while at the same time completely clueless. That Nightmare battle was freakin' INSANE! Nightmare's a Nobody? Auron's a Nobody?! The ENTIRE Mario-verse EXCEPT Mario & Luigi are Nobodies?!? And what da HELL are Completes?!?! Heihachi from Tekken and a Warcraft character are in cahoots?! What's next? Diablo from the self-titled series coming into the loop and sending in a resurrected Tenpenny from San Andreas?!? ... ... ...don't take that last part into consideration, okay?
Ud the Imp 2006-12-26 ch 5,	abuseHeartless, Nobodies, and Vast. Giygas, an entity from Earthbound, is now a Nobody. Troy being given a book authored by Organization XI. Things are definately heating up. PLEASE update some more!
The Ansem Man 2004-06-26 ch 4,	abuseHmph... A most impressive Kingdom Hearts Crossover... Although I had wish for Sonic to show his face, I can't expect that for every crossover, now can I? (I did it on ym own fic as well.) You set an amazing atmosphere. Perhaps with further updates I can see who these villains are ( I know Pokey, Valentina, Fawful, but Wily is someone I've only heard of...)
Ud the Imp 2004-06-25 ch 4,	abuseMe: I knew that was Fawful! And Dr. Wily's in on this too?! Ud: Holy crap! Dis be gettin' real complicated, yo! And when Alastor appeared in Luigi's grip in full form?! Damn! Talk 'bout plot twists! Me: Who the heck was that wispy haired dude? Who was the ring leader of that little group? Who the heck are Pokey and Valentina? And, most importantly, is Nightmare associated with them? Ud: Actually, da most important question wuz already asked in da last review. Me: Is there a connection between the Vast and the Heartless? Ud: Yup. Me: Update soon! And make sure ya do it a lot quicker!
Jase 2004-04-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow I love the word Entropy in fact my band is named that! I didnt even read your story yet I love it!
Ud the Imp 2004-03-23 ch 3,	abuseMe: Nightmare from Soul Caliber? Battling Auron from Final Fantasy X?! And their signiture swords are KEYBLADES?!?!?!?!?!?!? Ud: This is getting friggin' exciting! Me: I'm guessin' da green guy our heros encountered is Fawful from Mario & Luigi: The Superstar Saga. Ud: We were both thinking that the Vast and the Heartless were the same thing, but the whole color thing just threw us in a loop. Me: Are the Vast merely the beginning stage of a Heartless takeover? Are the Vast and the Heartless cousin species that work together in devouring worlds? Or are the Heartless and the Vast two completely different types of hell spawn? Ud: Tough questions, aren't they! Me: Update this soon!
Ud the Imp 2004-03-07 ch 2,	abuseMe: Wow! I can definately tell that this is gonna be a MEGA game crossover! I mean, Chozo in the Mario world?! Ud: I've also noticed you set this story at the very beginning of the Mario history (not to mention creating a whole new timeline). Me: Hopefully the characters of Kingdom Hearts are coming along for the ride (Disney, Square Enix, and Nintendo...heh heh...). Oh, and maybe they'll be some famous villains from other games that'll be the evil Keypers Sirius' been talkin' 'bout! One perfect example: Sweet Tooth the Clown from Twisted Metal! Ud: Assuming you've even heard of the series. Me: Finally, check the story "Crossing of the Paths" by M/AJ. It's a great read, and since you're probably a big game fan, you'll eat it up big time! Plz R&R my stuff.

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