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| mileyfan4ever 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseomg this made me cry...the last part where vaughn sees her...i loved it...great job:) |
| s 2005-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was great, a real tear jurker |
| AgentStrange 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abusemy god that was beautiful. so so sad. i'm so glad he saw her i just know i couldnt have beared it if he hadnt. that was lovely in every aspect and so true to life and real to the characters. well done and thankyou - dani x |
| melia 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHoly. And suddenly I remember why I've put you on my favourite author's list - because you deliver quality fiction every single time. This story was so fantastic - the idea that Syd knew where she was the entire two years? Brilliant. (I haven't been able to watch much of season 3, so if JJ came up with that, kudos to him; but if it was all your idea, double kudos to you!) Amazing work. |
| Fair Cate 2004-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWell you know Im a great fan of your writing and I really like this! It is an aspect I never really thought about - what Sydney would think if she was at Vaughn's wedding. Your writing style was just beautiful and you captured Sydney's character so well I really liked the way that Sydney and Vaughn met - as if in a dream. Even though it was reality, the ay you described it brought it into a dream like state. Well writen and presented! Hope to read more soon!! Cate |
| Emily Carol 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow... this was really good. I absolutely loved it! Almost made me cry... and I don't cry easily at fics... |
| Adelaide Bristow 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg, that was such a great story! lol it made me like so emotional i got this big lump in my throat when vaughn thought he was imagining sydney but it was really her...GREAT work this is such a good fic!!thankyou!! |
| Xendra 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! it was really beautiful. i liked that it fitted perfectly with the current storyline on the show. you even made me like kendall! i don't know if it was your intention but the ending made me cry, and i love it when a story makes me cry! awesome, really. keep writing like that! |
| MiLoV 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story! it was very well written. all though it was sad, it wa definately a awesome story! |
| Terin 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abusevery good. i liked it a lot. keep writing. Cheers, ~Terin:) |
| Cat Spring 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseOh god, this really made me cry. So much emotion and feelings. You should continue and not make it the end. |