This is so sad, but very sweet.

Made me think of 'The Yellow Wallpaper' ... but it was really good!

I love it! Even if it is depressing, it's still a good story.

Awesome!

i love your writing style ::claps::

for lack of better things to say, i'll leave you with a big HUG and much much luuve!

Your story has been entered to the competition on BW ^^. Good luck. For those of you who like this story, you should vote for it when voting starts at !

KYOU AND TOHRU! (I don't believe I know anybody else who brought someone else a bowl of soup...it was porridge, but whaat's the diff?) Anyhow, that's just my guess. It could be Haru for all I know, since it applies coz Rin is technically gone.
Nevertheless, the rambling thoughts thingem was actually pretty good. :)

again, good fic. I like your depressing moods. They fit in with...me. I think the character is Kyo and he's talking about Tohru of course.

Your style of writing is very interesting! I've never really seen anything like it, but I really loved the way you put things in. I loved the idea you had and what the topics were, and how you described things so poetically, yet in a way in which we can relate to and enjoy. It was fun reading this, and it was very angsty! But, romantic, too. I wish it had been longer with maybe some action of flashbacks--heck, I wish you had turnedt his into a story. I am sure it would turn out to be great. The character was Kyo,wasn't it? At first I thought it was Akito, but then when it said "when I brought you soup" I know it was Kyo, and that made me happy. I am a total Kyoru junky! He was talking about Toru, right? Hm. I would have thought Kyo would ended up with her. I hope you will make a sequel or something.

This is really sweet...I know it's a one-shot type thing, but my best friend and I love it. Please consider continuing!

That was really good! I just have one question though, um...let's see, oh yeah, when you say that she's gone, is she simply gone as in moved some where else, or has she moved on? Perhaps she even died?? Hm...was just wondering, or maybe it was to be a mystery? heheheh mysteries are fun! anywho, GREAT JOB I LIKE YOUR WRITTINGS, STORIES, THINGS!

Wah D'< That's so sad and sweet and goddammit, it's like, so good...
Good job. You made me love FFN again.

ehh its kyo n tohru osnt it nehh?

Poor Kyou. He's just so shy! I love him, he is just so funny XD I love your fic! It has the format of a simple fic, but it's really in-depth. Bravo!

oh mah god that was awesome! ^_^ very beautifully written. kyou about tohru, right? well... duh. ~__~ sometimes i have a thing for stating the obvious. @_@ anyways. that was superb. you definately have kyou in character here; your sense of language, grammer and imagery is quite fluid and keeps the reader gripped. i loved it to pieces! ^_^ good luck in the future!
-BkG

This is really good. Angsty and sad, not at all flat. It was very emotionally expressive and almost poetic. Poor Kyou.