*giggles* That was great. I loved the whole bed scene. It's nice to see Boromir playing around. He's quite the smart ass, isn't he! Haha! Awesome job.

Poor Nénor. I think that's how you spell it? I use a screenreader and I spell things as they wsound. Blind.

This was an interesting chapter. I wonder if he'll come back. Poor Eva.

Is Boromir a Dunedain? I know Faramir was a ranger of Ethilion (I don't know how to spell it off the top of my head), but was Boromir as well? I don't remember that.

Other than that confusion on my part (lol), loved this chapter. Eva's funny.

Lmao-The horse nearly pooping on him was hilarious. I love how everything's moving along. Not too fast, not too slow and we're always getting somewhere. Amazing work. I love the horse's name too.

Oh, and when you conquer Middle-earth, can I have Aragorn please? *puppy eyes*

“A couple things though. I ride on the horse, and I still don’t trust you.”

*giggles* Go Eva. I love that name. This is getting good!

*whispers* Rest in peace, Elyssa.

I'm glad Phoenix is well. Thank god for that.

Boromir! *grins* I thought he was Aragorn for a few moments there. Love that ranger, but Boromir's a damn close second. *grins*

Great, great job. To Middle-earth through a creek! That's a new one and to be honest? It's a rather beautiful transition. You know, minus the nearly drowning part.

I love this story.

Something's up with this stream, isn't there? *shudders*

Oh no! Seth's turned against her now? That made me cry too. Great chapter. Poor Eva. Can't wait to see what happens. I hope she and Seth become friends again. I hope that terribly.

Oh, god, poor girl! She probably felt horribly guilty...she was angry with them. And on her birthday too? God. And now her uncle. You had me crying during this chapter, even though I knew when the screams didn't seem to awaken him. This just gets deeper and deeper. I wonder what will happen to her now. Incredible job.

This was an absolutely entrancing beginning. I have fallen in love with this story already and I've only just read the first chapter. You've opened the door to so much. So many questions and so many answers to be found. Such imagery! You set the scene with care and perfection. You're a gem among authors and a true inspiration. I cannot wait to read more. This is phenominal. You've completely enveloped me in your world and there's no going back for me until I know everything.

Again, utterly outstanding.

I just wanted to tell you that I have totally enjoyed this story! I am also sad that Kelvyn spent most of his life away from his parents and sisters, but in the end, he did get to see them. He had a wonderful life and so did Eva and Boromir.

I like how the story was written and it was just great. Can't wait to see the one you are working on!

Valaren

This was a great story! It's still sad that Kelvyn lived his whole life away from his family but at least the rift was healed right? Okay so I'm a little sad but aside from that this really was a good story.

Just found this story and it's great! Hopefully the last chapter will bring the bouncing baby boy home from whoever found him...

Please update soon!!

Hee,
I love your story, I do. Looking forward to the baby's haha! =) Hope you start soon again with this story. I like the writing style a lot, it reads so easy and comfortable.
I'm sorry for my English if I did anything wrong, but I'm from Holland (first Dutch fan?).
Love, Léonie.