 Iolo 2004-10-29 . chapter 2I hadn’t forgotten about this fic., so I was glad to see the addition of a new chapter.
Hmm, questions and intrigue abound. I admit to being absolutely useless at deciphering plots, particularly those concerning Aes Sedai.
I am, however, eager to learn of Cariana’s plan and how it will affect/concern that clutch of ‘enquiring’ Aes Sedai. And I feel very sorry for that trio of sweet old ladies caught in the middle of it all. Bless ‘em.
In light of all this tangled conspiracy, it was highly unfair of you to deploy that tantalisingly portentous last line *smile*. Hope I don’t have to wait too long for the next chapter. |
 Iolo 2004-02-04 . chapter 1 This fic. certainly looks interesting.
There is an enormous depth of subtlety in this chapter, yet great foreboding as well.
The aspect that struck me most forcibly was that of the undercurrent of affection between the two main female protagonists, both of whom seem to be inwardly struggling against the machinations of the White Tower.
Yes, it sounds a wee bit ars*y, but it's the only way I can word it.
My curiosity is certainly piqued, so I hope to see further installments soon. |
 ElfIcarii 2004-01-19 . chapter 1Looks good! I hope you continue...you stayed true to teh style of Robert Joran's work. By the way, you forgot to put in a disclaimer... |
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