I wish you would finish this. It's a great read, but when will we see another update?

Okay, this is awesome. It's hard to find great fanfic and this is. It's in character (hard for AU), well-written and intriguing. I've been on an LOCI binge for a few weeks now and probably read a few hundred stories. This is definitely in the top 5.

My only complaint? It's not done! :) It's probably pointless to ask, but is there any chance this will be finished? I've certainly gotten road-blocked on fanfics before. I know it's incredibly difficult to pick them up once you've been stalled for so long. However, I'm really hoping you will be able to pick this one up again. Even an outline of what was going to happen would be great. See, your story is so good, an outline of events would be a joy to read. How many people can say that about their writing? I'd prefer a full finish, but I'll take what I can get. :):):)

How long is soon?

This is an intriguing story that should be finished!

This is an awesome story, one of the best, if not THE best, on this site! Please, please finish it. It's too good to go unfinished.

I'm adding this story to my favories and alerts so if there is another chapter, I'll know right away.

Again, please finish!
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I liked to this story through netherfield's favorites, and now I suffer for the lack of ending. Posting a WIP is inevitably a dangerous thing. :-) Still, thanks for the wonderful read - I'll keep the hope for an update alive...

And yet still I am incredibly impressed by this story as I look over it again! Hey, my birthday is May 1st. I'll be forty-one (and if you think turning forty was hard!)Wouldn' you love to cheer up a complete stranger by finishing this story? No? Can't imagine why not. Lol. Anyway, your writing is wonderful. Be well.

I'll give you a million dollars if you finish this story.

Please tell me you're going to update this incredible story!

Good God! And shame on you for not finishing this wonderful and riveting story! It is not polite to leave a lady-like creature such as myself dangling in this manner. Sigh. Please?

'Se non e vero, e molto ben trovato.'

If it is not true, it is a happy invention.

Error: Se non è vero, è un'invenzione felice.

Excellent story! I'm completely invested in the mystery and hope you'll finish this story. If not, well, I'll just have to keep re-reading these 4 chapters, eh?

So, I don't read WIPs and I have to be an absolute idiot to start on this one when it's been so long since it was updated. But, please, have mercy on your readers! This is such a good, well-developped plot with nice characterizations. If at all a possibility (Muses can be fickle, I know.), consider coming back to write/post more of this story. This is good enough to pay to read and that is saying a lot when it comes to the offerings at This story is that one speck of gold...

More chapters, yes? I was lucky enough that when I begged my friend to find fan fiction for me (I had no internet) that she picked this one up. It kept me occupied for a good while. ... If it isn't obivious, I love this story! You seem to have been away from this fic for a while, so whenever you get the chance to add another chapter... Well, I'm waiting semi-patiently. :)

I love this fan-fic. It's one of my favourites and I can't wait for the rest to come. :P

I love this story! I usually find that AU fics are great if they're done by a good writer, and that you certainly are. You've managed to capture the feelings and moods of each scene perfectly, and your characterisations are fantastic! Just don't leave us hanging for too long before you update okies? :)