they found her! yey! the evil licker monsters! those things creepy me out...update!!

Whew, they found her. It'd be bad if she was eaten by zombies.
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Keep on writing, this is really good

Wow what an interesting main character, a licker. You're use of description awesome. I really liked how the action sequences were, and the fact that the licker is always sneaking around. Great Suspence! So now he's or i should say it's gonna go after the little girl, sweet. Update soon! AMP

freaky..good job! ^_^

This is pretty good.
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I love the way that you actually capture the survival horror
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Not just 'oh no zombies eating my pa i better get dressed get a gun and go meet Nemesis'.
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The characters are actually human as well.

I really liked that fic. I hope it wasn't a one-shot because I really want to read more. Your a good writer;you gave just enough detail...and put the reader right there with the kids...you really captured the fear. I liked it a lot...come back and right more...

Wow. That was really good. When's the next part coming?

All I can say is... Wow. Honestly, wow. This has to be one of the best stories around here! It's simple in storyline, but you captured the moment well, and lemme tell ya, not very many people can do that. Awesome! ^o^

oh man! that's sad and freakin scary! i could totally feel the fear of that little girl! great job!