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| ScullyAsTrinity 2005-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou have quite a talent for taking Grissom completely out of his character and completely disregard the plot line of Butterflied. Alas, that's your right as a fanfic writer, you can do whatever you want with them. But it was well written and flows through. |
| Nerwen Aldarion 2004-07-28 ch 2, | abuseSorry but he was not talking about Lady Heather, he was talking about Sara. Remember she asked him out and he said no and he said he did not know what to do about *this*. She said that she was not going to wait around forever. Debbie Marlin looked like Sara as you know, but he was the only one who freaked because, if it was just a friendship thing why didn't anybody else stay overtime. If he was not talking about Sara why would it show her at the end? |
| hazakaza 2004-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWHAT? NO GSR? *spasms* |
| Tarantula1 2004-01-24 ch 2, | abuseHeather? Could you please announce in the summary which ship you're writing about so I don't waste my time here. Thank you! |
| Winn 2004-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuse:'( sniff sniff,good story. BAD Heather. That wasnt a nice trick to play on an unsuspecting shipper! Anyways insanity aside I liked it. Not very plausible but well writen and entertaining. |
| strawberry 2004-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOOh. I liked the twist. That was an amazing story. |
| Dark Hornet 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseOh My God, You didn't!! Whew, that was cool. Obviously I didn't think it was Heather until the end... |
| Not so blind 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat's the point of not declaring a pairing at the beginning? Afraid people won't read? Fortunately this was short enough not to have been a huge waste of time, but enough to show that you enjoy ridiculing Grissom's character and those of us who appreciate good, honest and 'in character' fanfiction. |
| T 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! Like a blow to the back of the head: I never saw that one coming! Good story even though it was G/H and not G/S. |
| Anamin 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseUm. . .I'm not certain that Gris would go back to LH. I seriously think that what happened in "Butterflied" if anything, gave him a kickstart to go back to Sara if anything. It was well-written, but I'm not sure if it was very plausible. |
| wannabelabrat 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseNice work! You had me curious! I loved it! |