Oi! Awesome, Addams. ^_^ Keep goin'!
-A-

I just read your author's note in chapter 4. Man, I should really read everything before I review. Lol. Anyway, too bad it's over. I thought it was awesome.I hope you write another one soon! Keep up the good work!
-KlutzyGirl

Yeah! You updated! I thought it was so funny when they both said, 'AFFERMATIVE', simultaneously. And I love your last line too. So so funny!
-KlutzyGirl

Great story! The use of colorful description is exceptional. Excellent! =)

One or two words...
Here are 5:
"This was a good story!"

Uh. . .I don't have anything against your story. . .but . .poor Rinoa. . .I like Rinoa (yes, I'm one of the very few who do) but other than her getting. . .uh. . .tortured. . .your story was nice. Short. . .simple. . .but nice.
And...congratulations, Quistis, Fujin. . .
I need a moment to mourn. . .
PS - The email address is not real. . .

I really like your story!! It's short and simple, yet very good!! I'm glad your chapters aren't so long that it take 20 minutes to read one. I'm wondering if that is the end or not. I hope it isn't. I really like your idea of the Quitis and Fuujin working together. I think this is the first! Keep up the good work, and update soon!
-KlutzyGirl

hehehe, I wonder what's the plan? I'm anti-Rinoa so I'm on the same side as Fujin and Quistis! Keep it up!