This is a fic that will stay with me for a while. You're treatment of transgenics blows me out of the water. Thank you for this, for ever or as long as the internet lasts.

Hi I dont mean to be nit picky but Ive got OCD and this was bothering me. In one part in chapter 3 you had Sunny say Pixs name in front of Chance before the whole everybody finding out about the names thing.
I wanted you to know because you've got the most freaking awesome stories, and I especially love the Left Behind verse.

Sunny shook her head as Max made her way back to the table with Chance.

“Did Pix just get sent to Solitary?”

“Yeah I can’t believe he beat me!” Max said sarcastically “I wanted to be first.”

“You wanted to be in Solitary?” Chance’s face was a picture of shock and Sunny laughed.

*g*

ZOMG, this is my favorite chapter so far (though I fully admit that, since I haven't read chapters 1-10, they might be better, but) this made me laugh out loud several times. And, shirtless Alec is always welcome. :)

Anyhoo, going back to read the rest, which, by the way, is kinda making me feel all ADD, 'cause I'm trying to read both Moving Alongside and Moving Ahead... very distracting, but definitely filling in the holes from just reading Moving Ahead.

Also, I heart your OC's, Pix and Drew and Sunny and Dek and, just, all of them, so awesome. :)

I KNEW it was Logan! I think it was the contacts thing.

He always had a special place in his ice, cold heart for his 'kids', and had brought the ** a free pass to comfort in Seattle.-**! I hate that attitude. Serves him right to be in his new postition.

"Max hated it when someone tried to steal her candy."-funny.

GOod Chapter, But I'm anxious to read more of Moving Ahead.

Cute. I'm a little interested in seeing an expanded version of these orginal characters, and an "outsiders" POV on the Alec/Max relationship, so I'm going to try and read through this!

This was a sweet, interesting beginning chapter.

My God! You are a fantastic writer, better then some of the crap they force feed us in school. I believe I went through every emotion with you and I can only beg you to finish the series and allow me to finally know how it ends.
You would not believe how anxious I am!!
Eagerly awaiting

OMG i nearly did cry on the 24th chapter...damn! Brilliant and engrossing as always. I'm hooked! lol

AnGeL

That was so awesome! LMAO, that was great! Kudos

OMG!

This was just beyond amazing. I can't believe that i waited this long to read this parallel story. I must say that this story has made me love your great stories even more. It really isn't heard of writing, let alone reading, about the minor characters of a story. Don't get me wrong, i loved the scenes with the rest of the transgenics in the main story line, but this is just...great. Of the characters that you delved into the more, i've got to say that my fave are Drew followed by Zan. Love those two. THerefore, i can't wait to read about what happens to those two in the next story. I'm on the edge of my chair!!
Because i read this story on your homepage, i was very happy that i was able to place faces to the names of your characters.
I'm really in too much of awe to say much of anything other than uberkudos!

=^o^=

I just finished reading moving ahead and moving alongside. Wow! great!, I do have a lot more to say :P but I typed everything up in an email but my hotmail account doesn't recognice co.uk so I can't send it, i've tried to send it anyway so I don't know if you got it.If you didn't then is there any other email adress I could send it to? Now lets hope you either got it or you read this :P

poor dek. ive just switched sides on the who should Drew go with debate in my head. GO WITH DEK! drew and dek all the way.

Fayth! I don't know what to say. It took me so long to calm down in order to even contemplate writing a review. And then when I was finally ready to, that pesky thing called 'work' decided to keep me busy for a while so this is the first chance I've gotten to even attempt one. I apologise sincerely, I know it's been a while since you posted this so I'll just get on with it.

This was absolutely amazing. I was on edge all the way through, I cried, I gasped...I think I even screamed at one point. (Adding even further fuel to my parents concerns over my sanity, but whatever.) My sister was in the room the entire time I was reading it and everytime I gasped or screamed, I'd turn around and I was like "No!" and she was like "I know!"

I really wish Steve and Mets didn't die. I know their deaths were heroic and that the possibility of everyone getting out safe just wasn't realistic, but I didn't realise how much I loved these two characters until they died. It must have been hard for you to kill them off. And Drew! Oh, I hope she's Ok! I kept wishing that Dek would find her but I suppose this Ed guy's better than the clean up crew. Ed's a good guy, right?

I have so much excitement for the sequel, I can't wait to see how everyone's gonna handle it out in the real world. Congrats on such an excellent story, I'll try my best to wait patiently for 'Surging Forwards.' : )

SORRY i have not reviewed my com broke i love it but dont end it plz plz plz plz

Don't worry I don't hate you for what happened to them! But I can't help wondering, if Drew made it? And what's with that person at the end? Who is Ed? And who did he pick up? So many questions! It seems like you're going to write a third part of the story, or? I sure hope so! Take care!
Nora

Sorry for that long time but I just start new semester and I've got a lot to do at the moment.
I still can't believe that the story had ended.
I'm so sad that Steve and Mets died.
I'm looking forward to your sequel, girl here dying to what will happen with Drew, she is the last one I think get in trouble, but I think That is Fayth remember.
You're amazing
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