Beautiful! I had thought the woman was Kagome at first, but when you mentioned the wind and Naraku, I knew it was Kagura before her name was even mentioned in the story. Kagura is one of my favorite characters, so I was happy that it was her instead. Your descriptions, writing style, and characterization all came together to make a great fic!

Good work! ^_^

That's so... twisted. And really wonderful.

"She would’ve cried, if she had only had a heart."
Wow. That line really got me. This was just amazing. The writing flowed beautifully, and it fit Kagura nicely.

amazing as always! you're stories never cease to amaze me! when are you going to finish starbreak?

Extremely nice little ficlet. It was very well written, had no spelling errors, was very descriptive and was simply magnificent. Wonderful job.

Oh! You're alive!
I gravely thought something had happened to you! ::earnestly perceives she's an ignoramus:: But really, I'm gladdened you're writing again--It had been a bit of while since you last updated anything! (Including your multi-chapter-on-the-run-fiction-that-are-/dying/.)
Lovely story, honestly, you're writing's always so SOMETHING...Like remarkable...or fabulous.
Nice. Keep it up!
-Anii

*Stares at screen for a few hours with little teardrops forming in corner of her eyes...then suddenly she burst out crying and squeezing her computer screen to death...yes, it's alvie...not anymores:)* T-This is soo...s-sweet! At first I saw S/K and thought oh goody! I LOVE Kagome/Sesshoumaru...but then I started reading it and realized it was Sess/Kagura! But!No matter!This was so superly-majorly-megaly-absolutely-wonderfully-terrificaly-um...great!Oh-my-gosh!I just love it so much I can't express it very well in words...*munch-munch*Thanks for the cookie:)

*has cookie* Meep. Great story. Very interesting pairing. I like it. ^^