 Soccer-Bitch 2005-02-19 . chapter 5this is a really great story. i cant wait to find out what happens next. ^_^ |
 TheCrazySaz 2004-09-22 . chapter 5Brilliant, absolutly brilliant. *sniff* i love it, so beautiful... and aggrivating all at the same time... yay though! good story! ta! :D |
 Clare 2004-04-09 . chapter 5 Amazing, I lvoed it |
 urdreamkeeper 2004-03-21 . chapter 5WOW! It took the better part of an hour to read this story, and let me say it was worth every minute! You are one of the most detailed, vivid writers. Very well done! |
 NG 2004-03-12 . chapter 5THIS IS TERRIFIC MY FRIEND!
Geesh, I enjoyed reading your chapter so much.
Well done! |
 snakefeather 2004-03-04 . chapter 5hey. this was great. lol. i loved it. i could only read in my free time so it took a while, but after finishing it, i decided it's officially the best SG-1 story i have read so far. keep writing. ;)
snakefeather |
 GateSeeker2 2004-03-01 . chapter 5"Then there was “Pete! |
 GateSeeker2 2004-03-01 . chapter 4You've added some very nice "thoughts" to the actual dialogue. It is always interesting, to me at least, to think about the emotion driving the dialogue. I like the twists that you have taken. However, and this isn't your fault, but I HATE PETE! Of course, I'd hate anyone that wasn't Jack! Hee hee :-) |
 charlie-sjer 2004-03-01 . chapter 5Fantastic! I hope you write more. |
 Aru 2004-03-01 . chapter 5 Ahh. *sob* Think I need those tissues now!
Great fic!
Is this seriously the end? Can we get a sequel if we beg lots? Plz? Pretty Plz wi web-chocolate n a cherry on top? |
 JacksGirl 2004-02-29 . chapter 5 I'm really enjoying this story. Please tell me that there's more coming. Don't let it end there! |
 the female apophis 2004-02-29 . chapter 5OH MY GOD!
i loved it!
it's just so...*sigh* worthy!
can't wait for the next chapter!
much love to ya hon!
*sends lots of hugs and smooches your way* |
 Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2004-02-29 . chapter 5That was excellent. |
 NG 2004-02-14 . chapter 4Wonderful. |
 BelovedOne 2004-02-10 . chapter 4*gets hopeful grin on face* More? Please? |