Hi WONDERFUL STORY!! but I remember reading this without all the little editing here and there, can you send me the link or post the link of the totally unedited version (meaning has all the raunchy parts). I absolutely loved this story and I want to read the original!!

Good work. I enjoyed it. But jeez, Inuyasha is slow not figuring out Kenmaru is his son. @_@

Oh my gawdd... o_o I think this story is one of my favorites. I swear it. I read the entire thing ((while I was supposed to be sleeping, but why is that important?)) in one go and absolutely LOVED it. The whole memory loss thing is one of the things that really drew me in, and Inuyasha's conversation with Yuka and Eri. I also got a good laugh out of the "That's my necklace/That's my Daddy's/Oh **" thing X3

Really nice story enjoyed it a lot. Had tolaugh at Hojo finally finding out.

Amber

lol i was wondering where the 'unedited' vs. is? ;)

kimiko

OH DAYUM!
U GOT TOLD B!ICH! >=D
WHOOT, GO SESSHOUMARU >.<
lol sry, apples make me high sometimes T_T
anyways, love how da story's coming along. :P

kimiko

Great story second time I read it. I have to say it was better the first time tho. I remember most of the parts that were took out. Their were very few Errors, but nothing can be perfect right. I must say you a great writer now all you have to do is get this posted some were unedited.

~~Sieg

I'm glad they're together again :)

now that is definetly a strange thing to happen to a guy.

i love this story its wonderful

loved the story. ur like my favorite fanfic writer. this was actually the first fanfic i'd ever read. i'd read it before but then i lost it and i was happy to find again yesterday.

Hey Kadin-Lai -A...uh prefix thingy like sama, in my own language- I really love your fanfictions, even though I am very much into Harry Potter now, I just tilinau-love, think, informal- your Inuyasha stories! Only a fiew catch my Juieye -of Earth and trees, or hazel eyes- now-a-days like movie house hanyou or your broadway series, Faumatina!-Thankyou, formal, used for those who you feel are of a higher rank than yourself- I aspire to be as hau-great- as you are at wrighting someday. I will keep practising, and you are a very good Khail-Woman formal- to write such things.
Nitu Muala -Happiness in the night, a parting said for good luck and fortune-
Randi -Of the sky-
P.S. Sorry to put all those pesky words in there, but I keep forgetting myself and typing a language that is cherished by me, and since I currently have no backspace button... I just thank Jaquois-God- that I have awesome mad spelling skllz...:D.

amazing story... really liked it... so happy that kagome and inuyasha are finally together in the end with their son... good job... great work...

Hmm.. an interesting story so far. I plan to keep reading, but I had to drop a note here before I was done.

I know you might have censored this story for FanFiction, but honestly the "(Edited Missing 'X number of' words)" is highly distracting. It makes me want to know what you did, and I"m sure that might be part of your intent. But in my case, I am very close to just not reading anymore at all. I can't feel like I'm getting anything out of the story because the edits are so abondant, distracting me as I read through what you wrote and breaking my immersion in the story.

I'm sorry if this sounds like a rant, but I truely feel you could have gone about this much differently instead of potentially frustrating readers. Placed at the end or beginning of the story would be perfect. Heck, even bolded with bright flashing lights and bells when placed at the top or bottom of the chapter would be good. But really, what am I getting out of a chapter that has practly every other sentence telling me "this portion is missing a large chunk both before and after it?"

I read this before I another site, and I remember really liking it :) You portrayed the characters very well, and I loved the conflict in the plot. ^_^ :+fav: