Wow! Great Story! Loved it! One of my favorites! smiles

and put breaks in the story when you change from scene from scene. smiles

It would be nice if you put who's prospective your writing from when you change prospective. "I" is so unhelpful. Also it would be nice if you had a beta to check your work for spelling and grammar and other errors in your work. I hope this doesn't depress you. Have a great day. I still love your story. smiles

I love your little notes at the end of the chapters and I love this story. smiles.

I have read this story and it is one of the best that I've ever read and you are a great author!

Hey that was awesome i can't wait for the next one.Oh you can have Ganko hook up with me.I'm a wolf demon though just let me know wat ya think about it and ask me what ever else you need to know for you story.

I like Inu Yasha and Ganko the most! They're cool. If only I had friends like them

Great work! I loved it!

Great story. Is the sequel up yet? Wendy

Hey, I love your style; it was really easy-to-read and informative. I think you'd be a great essay-writer (and a story-writer too! Believe me!)

Why do you indent the paragraphs? Isn't it enough that you skip two lines? You don't have to do both things to distinguish paragraphs. I just thought you ought to know.

Trust me on this: Inuyasha was wrong! *Gives Inuyasha a death glare* You are a great writer! Whee!

that was ** awesome! yay kags is a kitsune, i luv her as a kitsune cuz she's more conected to shippo and in this case kurama/youko. yay! sry im going to see HP5 today! whoohoo!

DIE! HOJO!

please write more

please write more

just for making those cliffies im going to tie you up dangle you bye your ankles make you immortal but able to feel pain slit yuor throat, wrists, and cheeks.then im going to drink all of your blood and then im going to cut off all of your body parts(all of them)and make you use an excruciating process to put yourself back together.

bye the way nice story