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| KatieHL 2004-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god! Please don't let it end there! Where has Grissom gone to? And where is Sara going to go? This was so heartwrenching. Please, we must have more resolution! |
| luxor 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseYou're killing me here. Making me cry again! What despair and hopelessness (not that you didn't warn us). I don't want to ... but a part of me believes that this is a likely scenario. What a waste of potential all in the name of fear. You brilliantly capture the essence of both Grissom and Sara--their emotional states and behavior definitely ring true to their characters at this moment in S4. Sad but beautifully written. Your stories never fail to move me and you have outdone yourself with this one. Loved it. |
| Pheo 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseSo sad! Sniff. Very realistic, though. I mean, I would probably have left after three years of his BS, let alone another one! I love your searing stories, and even though this one was sad, it was still good. I was thinking about how it would be if Sara left to join the next CSI spin off and how Griss would react. This would make lots of sense with your story. Sniff... it was great...sniff. |
| Ghibli 2004-01-20 ch 1, | abuseAlthough this story (as well as Shards of her Heart) were much darker than I'm used to when reading your stories, I can't say I'm disappointed at all. The characterisation, emotions and descriptions were wonderful and very much in character I felt. *heaves big sigh* Great job Anansay! |
| HarrysLover 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad. |
| southernbend 2004-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh! Thatwas so sad. I started to cry. How about writing a happy one now? Please for me?? Trinteen04 |
| annie 2004-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was very good. I just like to get a different perspective every once in a while. I like serious and dark pieces and I always enjoy good writing and yours was impeccable as always. It was wonderfully introspective. Glimpses of Sara's and Grissom's feeling. Very good. |
| annie 2004-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was very good. I just like to get a different perspective every once in a while. I like serious and dark pieces and I always enjoy good writing and yours was impeccable as always. It was wonderfully introspective. Glimpses of Sara's and Grissom's feeling. Very good. |
| Anamin 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseO. My. God. What the hell would I do? That was excellent! I was waiting for a fanfic from you and you delivered. Really powerful. I cried. I honestly hope it doesn't go that way. Excellent writing, as usual. |
| wyldheart 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAs always, this was beautifully written and descriptive -- the characters, the emotions, and the setting all come to life. There's something to be said for an angsty, sad ending...it was heartbreaking, but just as satisfying as a positive conclusion. I loved it! |
| PirateQueen7903 2004-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe story was okay, but in the end it makes me want to cry. |
| Hannah 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseNicely done. |