It was interesting the way you tried to write this fic in the format of the months of the year. For most part this works well. I liked this format from about Fred onwards but I think before this you struggled with making 12 stand alone monthly stories and one intertwining story. Nevertheless I love your work!

Poor Lindsey. What a hell his life was. I can't imagine a family selling their child for drugs & alcohol. At least now he has a wife, a son, and another on the way. And Fred has a miracle child as well. Sleep's not going to be easy to get soon! I think this was a great ending for a great story. Thank you!

I tried to access the video, but I couldn't (I'm technologically challenged!), so please do email it to me. I liked the cliffhanger here, but I'm really worried about Lindsey. What he did had to have had an effect on his health. I hope he'll be okay for the next chapter. I think Andrea sounds like a real firecracker--Gunn will have his hands full with her! Their kids will be something else. Anyway, I'm awaiting the birth of Faith's daughter and the resolution of this great story. I love this!

These are really interesting. I hope you decide to write more, because you really did do a hell of a job with each month.

Wow! Great chapter. About writing Gunn...I'm not that good at it eigther. I figure, don't overdo the slang. Use the KISS meathod (Keep it simple, stupid!)! Not that you're stupid. Great chapter, please continue soon and all that jazz! Hugs, Lily :)

Okay, here's my idea. Gunn knows that Lindsey loves Anne, but he won't do anything because of all the guilt from his past. He doesn't think he deserves her or deserves to be happy. So Gunn plays matchmaker (maybe Spike can help--he used to be evil, too). How about a nice romantic dinner? And let's get to know Andrea better. She could scheme right along with her husband. I'd like to see more of Connor & Harrison, too. This was actually a great chapter. I love what you did with Robin, and you're right about a principal being as busy in the summer as during the school year. This is great. Remember--Lindsey & Anne in the next chapter, please?

Okay. You asked for some opinions on the next chapter so here's what i think...
Fred should totally live. Illyria is the pure essence of evil, so she should not come in. I don't think that Wes should go all 'season four/five crazy' on everyone, and Fred and Wes's families would make interesting conflicts with everyone in the story. I don't think Faith should have problems with her pregnancy. But, remember, this is your story. I'm sure you will come up with amazing ideas no matter what! Great job, Please continue soon!

Don't kill off Fred, she's a great character to have around. Uh, name ideas for the baby:
Morgan
Danielle
Jaden
Alexis
Teagan
Jessie
Sydney

Hi,
My name is Cale and I am one of the writers of the site -- . There has been some recent openings in our writing squad and we were wondering if you were interested in joining our writing team. This is a team effort and we already have some planned arcs and such. But of course there is always room for your creative ideas and concepts since this is a team effort. If you are interested, I will give you more details about the stories and everything else. I hope you consider us. Thank you.
-- Cale

What did Lilah say to Lindsey? Why did she kiss him? He's still good, isn't he? What happened to him when the fighting started? Please continue to use him--maybe he and Anne can get married before it's over.

Fred should not die, and Wes shouldn't fall to pieces, either. He should be strong for her during her convalescence. Faith should name her baby after Robin's mother, who was also a slayer. Maybe Lindsey can talk Robin into helping to teach the runaway kids at Anne's shelter when he's not with Faith.

I wouldn't mind a little more Connor & Harrison.

Thank you so much. I am honored to be your muse. I loved it. Spike is such a softie when it comes to kids. I really enjoyed his scenes when the kids are running rampant over him. And, of course, I just love the idea of Anne & Lindsey.
I think they'd be very good for each other. It was nice to see Davis--I've always liked him. If he married Tru & took her name, he'd be Davis Davies! I love it. And Spike is finally getting someone to appreciate his poetry. Excellent! This was great. Can we maybe expect a wedding before the end of the year?

I'm writing this with tears in my eyes because of the scene in which Lindsey begs for forgiveness & Cordelia gives it to him. So beautiful. I'll read it again and again, I'm sure. And for Cordelia to go to her reunion as Queen C. I'm happy for her. Now can we PLEASE find a girl for Lindsey? If not Kate (and why not? He could easily get together with her.), then how about Anne? He could help her with the shelter and fall for her. Or he could defend Gwen Raiden. . .

Poor, poor Lindsey! Hasn't he suffered enough, being homeless and everything? Not to mention the knives in the thighs? I really feel for him (of course!). I wish he'd find someone himself. What's Kate been doing lately? Just a suggestion. . .

Oh this was just great. You captured Wesley amazingly. And Spike giving him advise, hilarious.

I definitely did not expect Lindsey. I thought maybe Holtz. However, Lindsey fits the prophecy just fine. And now I get the southern thing. I just found your story and want to say that I am definitely enjoying it. I also liked the whole Tru Calling crossover. I can't wait for the next chapter.