The story is actually pretty good but one fact irks me. Are you purposely calling the Commodore Joesph? Because his name is James.

It's an intersting story but as for you idea of Norringtion not used to working I don't think that would be at all true

YAY! You finally updated! I'm so happy! This was such an awesome chapter. So glad that you got through your writer's block, I know when I get it I land up staring at the comp. screen for who knows how long. lol. I did notice the person in the chappie... Anyway you did a great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Keep up the great work. ^_^

I just finished... you should update soon... I want to know what happens next.

hey chika! Long time no see, my hotmail's been cut off! T-T no... anyhow, I had to re read most of this cuz I forgot how it went. So far, its good... but you should really try and spice things up more. The thing with Jack and Marion finally meeting was good... and Will joining the crew was good too!

when are you going to update the xmen stuff? I mean, this was like the one you updated frequently.. then you stopped...which I have to say ** me off cuz it was just getting good

I was just looking at the profile and I didnt know that you wrote POTC stuff, so I read it. The start was weak...but its getting better.

so technically this is where the story really begins right?

Briggs is Jack's father... I thought it was kind of obvious. lol cool so Marion is home... now what?
when is she and jack going to meet?

"Onto... where are we going?"
That is so something Jack would say! Seriously, continue... update soon!

awesome! I just read this story yesterday and I still haven't finished it... but its an awesome story!

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I love the story so far. I am just wondering when you are going to update it... What happens next?

i love this story!! please keep on adding chapters onto it!

Keep Writing

So glad that you updated! Really loved this chapter. Please update as soon as you can. ;o)