i absolutely love this story, i know it's been a very long time since you updated but i relly hope you haven't quit this story. i don't know vèry much about the show inuyasha, i've only seen a few episodes but i wouldn't mind watching all of them just so i can fuly understand this fic ^_^ please continue (also if you could tell me the name of the guy ami dreams about it would be vèry helpfull.)

Okay, I really like the premise of this story, and everyone is fairly in character, so I am going to be very very picky. In the third chapter, near the end, it says, "non-pulsed". I think you mean "non-plussed". Non-pulsed is a grammatically incorrect way or saying 'without a pulse'. Non-plussed is another way of saying unfazed or nonchalante.

Um, the grammar and spelling in general could be greatly improved upon. It seems like you wrote it without sending it off to a beta for further perusal. If you don't want or have a beta, a dictionary and a writing guide always help. I notice that that you use a very formal writing style, but you are telling your story from Ami's point of view. Maybe being a little less formal would make this flow better, because many times it seems awkward.

I like most of the interaction with the characters, but Ami seems a little forced at times when speaking. Normally she is the calm, collected scout that takes time to think a situation through.

Also, I am not a fan of the Japanglish that many of the anime fandom are so fond of using. It's very difficult to wade through, m and it breaks the continuity of the story.

I really do like your idea! It's very original and cute. I like that Ami was changed into a Kitsune; are you going to explain how later on? Are you going to explain why?

Keep it up, though, and keep improving! I look forward to seeing where you take yourself with your writing in the next few years.

I like this story.So who's Ami pairing up with.Update soon.Thanks for the read.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
update this story!

I love this story so please update soon.

I love you story!! It's great!! Keep writing!

The most interesting aspect of this story is how you talk about the difficulties someone with a previously human mind has after they become a demon.
I hope you continue with the interesting events regarding the human to demon transformation.

I also hope that you don't just follow along with the normal Inuyasha timeline, but rather actually allow the addition of a character to change things.

Whatever you do, keep writing.

::whines:: You haven't updated in over a month! Where did you go? Are you hurt? In a coma? DEAD? O.O...Well, I hope you come back soon. I want to see what happens next.

Cheers

A very interesting plot.

Sesshomaru/Amy! yay
hopefully...
Anyway this is a great tory i can't wait to read it again..
so..
UPDATE ^_^

I like it! Is it going to be a Sessomaru/Ami pairing?UPdate soon! ^^

This story was so good that I had to reveiw it twice. As always, love the story and please update soon.

not bad...

I think someone has a little crush...

I didn't think Ami would get back together with Inuyasha and Kagome. I think Inyasha will agree to teach Ami but rub it in her face any chance he gets that she needs his help. I guess Yura of the hair will be showing up next chapter, and then after that Sesshoumaru again(wahoo!)I wonder what Sesshoumaru will say when he sees that Ami is traveling with Kagome and his half-brother(not to mention Inuyasha's reaction when he finds out Ami met his brother).
Anyways I hope you update soon.:D