 Christy 2006-09-15 . chapter 1 Perfect:)The most beautiful oneshot fic about the acolytes I've ever red:)It should be an episode..trust me,ya have a talent;)can ya write more about them..they're my fav team:))By the way..whose the girl,Kitty?she sounds like 'er..or maybe it isn't someone important at all..just a human girl he loves..c'mon,who is she,huh?:) |
 amber 2005-02-04 . chapter 1 u rock! sorry for any spelling errors...it was so cool. u need to write more! |
 Houkanno Yuuhou 2004-05-31 . chapter 1I thought, perchance, that this might be about Kitty, but I was surprised to see "blonde child" written there. Obviously, it's about Illyana. ;) Good fic. |
 Piotr's girl 2004-01-23 . chapter 1Aw! I like Petey fanfics! Is it Kitty? Ya, it's Kitty! It must be! |
 Dee Saylors 2004-01-21 . chapter 1 Wow! That was really good! I am so amazed! I praise you! Okay, um, later I guess! Bye!
-Dee |
 Mysterious Fan Girl 2004-01-20 . chapter 1 NO! YOU CAN"T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!
um, my guess is kitty. am i wrong?
mfg |
 Sanura the Insane 2004-01-19 . chapter 1O! I bet it's your OC! I bet i bet i bet! ^_^ UPDATE RBE! NOW! Erm.. sry bout that. I just love the story. That's all ^_^ |
 Moonfire Goddess 2004-01-19 . chapter 1I have no idea!! Good story...are you going to update Rebuilding Everything soon?
Luv ya, Keyaira |
 Caliente 2004-01-19 . chapter 1Dude. Who was the chick?? Great story tho. Nice insight into the Acolytes tho. Fascinating. I liked the inclusion of Illyana. So sweet. I hope you write more. Adios.
~Caliente~
a.k.a. LeXi |