at the end of this chapter dont u mean that REI was

this story's started off gr8 alrright but its just that there are so many spelling mistakes that its a bit hard to read. i know nobody persfect and everything, but we actually understood the story that might be nice too.

hurry up and finish the damn story.!

It's okay, the only problem is that there's lots of miss spellings. Otherwise, love it, make another chapter or two, thx!

looks ok but LEARN TO SPEAK ENGLISH. And use grammar and stuff. Makes it much easier to read.

Oh, hey that was a great chapter!! ^^ Poor, Rei, having to do a math problem...Well, the whole chapter was over all really, really good and I hope that you update soon because I want to know what's going to happen...now!! meow~!! =^-^=

continue!

i like ur fic very much!

i think your writing is great, though i have to admit you have some mistakes in spelling (like putting the instead of they) not serious & nobody is perect. but the whole storyline is great. i really want to know what happens when Rei meets Darien and who this guy really is. write the next chapter soon, pretty please!
I'll do crazy if I read an uncomplete story and I never found out the ending. please don't make me end up in a mental institition

Writ the next chapie soon I can't wait to read it

OH
The plot thickens

I Hope Kira's not hiding anything from Rei
Even though I know she is

This is off to a really good start. It's kind of hard to follow because it's in present tense ( most people just do better in past) but you've written it very well so ti's not all that bad. Again, it's a good story and I hope that you continue with it!

It's off to a good start this Darien character seems pretty interesting. The Rei and Kira fluff is really cute. The chapters could be a little longer, perhaps more details would help. Maybe it's just me , but stories sound better in past tense than present (other than when the story is in first person). I hope this helps.