wicked angsty
write more soon, ne??

no that was very original! original and good! yet again, a non happy ending for Hiro. when will that guy ever catch a break? anywhoo, great work!

scratch all the other reviews that said other fics of yours that were the best, because i take it all back. this one's the BEST OUT OF ALL OF THEM!! and this time i mean it! awesome ShuxHiro and i wouldn't have it any other way! that lime you have of them is good, but this is just so much more passionate! excellent, excellent work! i know this is probably a one shot, but please continue!

hmm... ^^
really nice story ^_^
very nice, I can say ^_^

man! that so damn depressing... well not really but it was sad... nice one! keep up the workz!^^;

Actually, I find it quite original, thanks. ^^ It's well written, also. You did very well with Hiro's pent up emotions.

aww omfg! i never expected them to kiss!! that was soo sweet, when i read it..my mouth wideded right into a smile! your a wicked good writer!! please add more chapters soon..i'm just dying to read them..till next time..ja de! =) (right?..lol)

Ka-Wa-i! *sniffles and smears makeup*
So cute. *eyes wobble*
I love Hiro/Shu.
Great job; keep up the super work!
~naomi

wow! i actually felt my eyes bubble here.

Aw! Poor Hiro! However, this was a very nice fic. I hope you write somemore graviation ones like this!

Hey just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVED this fic. It was really nicely written and I lived all the conflicting emotions along with poor Hiro (*hugs him tight*). He is just SO cute. It was brilliant, are you going to continue it? It has a lot of potential!