very cute

That was a nice little story. Very insightful and I think you got into Jack's feelings perfectly. You know reading this I started thinking that both the Witter brothers love some one who calls someone else their soulmate. I know nothing to do with your story but it was just a random thought. Nice job.

Oh gosh... the finale: I don't think I've ever cried that much while watching something in my life. Anyway, I guess I should review seeing as this box sort of says "review story" and I like to follow orders. Hmm, that came out kinkier than it did in my head. Well, I loved this! It was very sweet, but of course... quite sad. I guess that makes it bittersweet. Wow, queen of the articulation, I am! It definitely wouldn't be easy for Amy. Jack and Jen were so soulmates! While I normally have somewhat of a thing against Doug (I can't forgive him for being mean to poor Pacey [apple of my eye]) you really made him more likeable, but in a believable way. Great work!

ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!
I love Doug and Jack together. You seemed to nail their personalities.
You should keep writing, You're very good. Another Jack/Doug story would be nice!
-Gina(anne918)

I disagree with S. S. I think you portrayed Doug well -- he's not perfect, nor does he pretend to be. This is no doubt shifted in Jack's eyes, and HE sees Doug as perfect. Anyway, I loved this so much! It was so cute! I swear, you're a terrific author. Can't wait for more!! And there had BETTER be more. :D

I really liked this! It was short and bittersweet. You really don't see enough Jack/doug fic, so I'm glad someone else is writting it!

I liked that this story kind of gave us a glimpse into what Doug and Jack's post-finale life could be like, since we never got to see any of that on the show. The only problem I really had was that Doug seemed a little too perfect. I know that he wasn't a main character on the show so you pretty much had to completely create him, but I have definitely never met a guy who was THAT outstanding. It just seemed a little unbelievable. Other than the fact that Doug just seemed to step right out of the fantasy universe of perfect guys, I liked your story; you have great ideas and you're a pretty good writer. Good job.