There it is.

This was always one of my favorites. Literally took my breath away the first time I read it, because it's so wonderfully cruel. I love the imagery, the way you blend the scenes into one another, the way you've somehow gotten the reader right into the crucial parts of Aya's head.

Most of all, I love how you didn't bother justifying any of it.

I hope you guys are still out there somewhere.

Best of luck.

Nice, a bit cunfusing, but good.

I loved this story, mainly because of its erotic theme about Aya being a sultry

prostitute. I dunno, I guess it was so kinky in an unusual way that it definetly

caught my interest. This story is HOT! If I ran into Aya hooking on a streetcorner-

I wouldn't object to being his customer, if you know what I mean! *wink wink*

* wide eyes * I like this. I like it a lot No matter wut u say , this is one hell of a story.