What did they do? Why do they have to leave the palace? lol, a little explanantion please... anyway, you gonna update soon or do i have to nag you? cause i will, this is a good enough story to bother.

YAY! i'm obsessed with Numair and there is a whole chapter named after him! YIPE! keep up the story!

I like it, why don't you have more reviews? People are crazy. Sorry about your beta reader. As for grammar and spelling, maybe I'm a bit unobserbative, but I haven't noticed any mistakes. My only problem is with paragraphs. I'll stop bothering you now. Good bye and argadosh!

Great job Dead Life! Sorry bought not getting around to read through it for you. I'll make sure to do it for the next chapter.
Yami:You really sure you can be a beta reader YNCT??
Er, no? Well she forced me into doing it!
Yami: Right. I'm going to go see if Kaiba wants to duel.
Why??
Yami: you're boring me.
Gr! Oh yeah! Keep up the good work DL! Here have some cookies! *gives DL cookies*