aw...thats sweet

Oh...that was so good! I loved it. You're quite the writer, I'm impressed.

It was beautiful... _

Awesome I've always had a vision of Vegeta sending a message to Bulma throught Trunks And I always felt that they had spoke to one another that Last night that Future Trunks was in the past.

It was great I COULDN'T FIND any stories on the subject though.

I would've written my own version but I Wouldn't want to ruin such an amazingly sweet plot. I cant write good stories (Read the one I've posted "The Mis Adventure of the chestnut family" and you'll know what I mean)

loved it!

This is so good! Great job! -

That was wonderful. I loved it. It was very well written, Keep up the great work_

That was perfect. Very in-character. I don't mind that it was short. It was just right.

Ayod (who loves Future Trunks)

that...was the most beautiful thing I've read today. Well, with Trunks and Vegeta. It was almost perfect...actually, ok you got me. I almost cried too! I only wished it hadn't ended.

Awww That was a lovely fic. It was so in character, and very sweet. You also captured the situation very well, like it was the last time Mirai Trunks and Vegeta had together. It seems just like the kind of interaction they would have together .

I'll agree with you...you did a DAMN good job in keeping both in character...and that's something a good writer is capable of doing. I loved it! Now...I have a challenge for you...

Seeing that you're able to do this well, and you know Mirai's character good, I wanted to know if you'd like to make another adventure (a bit A/U) with a bit of romance...? I know, that's old, several have done it... but actually, if you can't think of a good plot, and new character, I've got it all ready...everything. I'd just like to see it all from a good writer's perspective. You don't have to take the offer though... I just thought it'd be pretty cool...but let me know, okay? And great fic by the way!

AWWW. Wonderful writing and very touching.

That was good,very good. I would recommend this story to anyone who considered reading it. Good job -

That was soooooo good! You made me cry! I loved it!

That was great, and it was not ooc, write more!