 J-Rock and Visual Kei Fan 2008-11-16 . chapter 5 hey,
awesome fanfic! i love it! i hope you make some more kakasaku fanfics!
bubii!
p.s. this is the real J-Rock and Visual Kei fan. I'm just on a different computer ^^ |
 Kijo Asuka 2008-10-28 . chapter 5Great, awesome fic. I liked how some things were distorted, not clear. It made everything make more sense to me...
You portrayed Sakura perfectly, as she would have been if Sasuke never left, and she never went with Tsunade to teach her.
I would have liked more to the ending, but, you're the author, so, you chose the end, and that's the end.
I also liked how you didn't make Sakura of legal age. Not that I'm for illegal things, but it would have been weird if you wrote this as Sakura being 18. |
 Kijo Asuka 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Rly good, I loved it. you captured Sakura perfectly, and Naruto and Sasuke would be like that.
Don't worry, I'm not twelve. :) |
 pisquenta 2008-10-19 . chapter 5I really liked it, especially because Kakashi wasn'r all lovey-dovey. And Sakura wasn't the innocent virgin people insist on writing!
I just didn't understand why you put the rating as M, it could've been a T. There was no language or explicit content. |
 dragontwin99 2008-10-05 . chapter 5Very interesting and enjoyable :) |
 bobalinabokonon 2008-07-23 . chapter 5You get lots of bonus points for having a feasible plot. Bonus points! YES! It's very pretty, and discreet (sort of like, I imagine, an actual relationship b/w them would be. If it's possible). |
 keepinXitXreal22 2008-07-09 . chapter 1kool :) |
 dr. sluice 2008-06-27 . chapter 2Honestly, this is my favorite Kakashi/Sakura story. Not just because it's generally good writing, but because the realism of it all. Sakura's a teenage girl here. Not portrayed as a pink-haired super bimbo. And I like that. |
 sorceress115 2008-06-23 . chapter 5Beautifully done; thank you for sharing this. |
 Tani Barton 2008-05-22 . chapter 5I liked this a lot. I thought you did a wonderful job with Sakura and the insecurity that she's feeling. It really rang true to me. I also liked the ambiguity of Kakashi; it meshed with the way I see him very well. |
 M1nks 2008-05-20 . chapter 2Hi - like this story, although I don't think that Sakura is depicted at a bad maturity level in the Manga. I know girls of 16 in our world are generally all stupid and girly and full of themselves but being a fighter and dealing with life and death issues on a regular basis makes people grow up fast. Kids in wartimes or who have parents die etc don't have time for all of the usual teenage angst rubbish for example.
Anyway, you've finished it all now but I'd still like to say thanks for a good story. |
 Li Michal 2008-04-26 . chapter 1Meh, I couldn't find the manga chapter where he's doing the pushups! Do you know, by any chance? |
 Ashcat 2008-04-14 . chapter 4Wow.. this was so painfully accurate for Sakura's age. you really are handling this masterfully - I love how insecure and questioning she is. Really a fantastic job! |
 Kryptocow 2008-04-06 . chapter 5I really like this writing. It's slow but in a way that my mind is when it becomes clear. And that really works as the end. It's not perfect but... it works. I really like this story and I can't really explain why. |
 lenaetv 2008-03-22 . chapter 1I loved it! I wish there was more though. But still it was a good ending. |