This is just lovely; I haven't really got much wittier to say, unfortunately. You write both characters very well, and the interplay is perfect -- and best of all, there's SUBTEXT. Brava!

Excellent! Great syntax and masterful delivery of the slow burn. Equal to if not better than the stuff produced by the people who get paid to write about these characters. Please write more about these two.

Very nice. You managed to capture two very independent people perfectly. And I loved the dialogue (both spoken and unspoken) between these two. More, please.

Cool, you're still going with this!
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Great interaction b/w both characters. Reminds me a little of the Ripley/Hicks scene from Aliens.
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If this is how he comes on to women, what does he do on a first date?? ;-)
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I am a little surprised that Adama appears almost obsessed to destroy as many Cylons as possible. My thoughts were that he'd keep sending the fleet farther into the unknown.

tremendous insight into the characters. Great story!