This story is quite intresting, but the characters personality's change each chapter, one minute Quistis is being all reliable and nice, then she's zooming around chasing pigeons. Same with Squall. Try and pick a personality and stick with it, your story will flow better then. It's good though.

Great chapter, goos job. I remember reading this story when it only had 4 chapter, when Squall had to give CPR; and wondering if you'd ever update. I'm glad you did, thanks for the review, by the way.

Ignore the flame, I liked Quistis' eccentric behaviour and Squall's reactions. I'll be looking forward to learning more of how Squall got into his condition (my money is on a certain Rinoa ;D). Update soon!

that was the shittest story that i have ever read. squall leonhart is not like that. you have degraded him from his handsome brave self and you have changed him to a snivelling little reck. try better next time.

Basket weaving *snorts* Lol, please continue, it's really funny.

can you beleave i actually love this story it makes me laugh a lot picturing squall acting crazy and his toughts n' all!

Arsenipiom... heheh. Nice to see Squall finally beginning to deal with some of his fears.

That's quite a start there. I like how you've incorporated Squall's thoughts into it. It gives a nice window his obviously very screwed up mind. You must have had to do some research on the various types of phobias. That's not something an author on a site like this one normally does. Since you indeed did it, I commend you. It's an interesting layout for a plot. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
-Maverick

Heh - Squall's cycnicism is good

I like it - please continue

o...k... O_O! interesting. update soon eh

That was so funny. Ah hee hee! Thats a really good idea for a story I always did think Squall was a bit of a loney! You've got a great sense of humor, really whacked I like it. Hope to hear more from you.

Oh very nice:) If this is going to be a Quall then well wohoo since I love those.^^ Keep it up,i'm interested in reading more and it was actually very funny too.