...Well that was kind of depressing. I liked the dance, though.

I feel sorry for Hanabi and Neji. But else from that It is a very good story and I like it!

A dance around a given line and an idea can make a tale unfold into a story before our eyes. One. Two. Three. You started it and ended it in great rhythm.

That was gorgeous. Poetic and IC and metaphorical and..gah. You're brilliant.

Very beautiful. :]

Simply breathtaking and full of angst, and I presume that Hinata is pregnant with Neji's first child (and her first child as well)? :]

This is well done.

that story is gorgeous really like it, at first i dont understand nothing because im not natural english speaker but the third time i do is a really nice story FAV. also love the phrases you put at the end of your stories.

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PRISCILLA THATS MY NAME

lovely. your narusasu's are the best written naruto fics you have, without question.

wow. i like the way you write where it could be taken as anything and everything. so cool.

I find this story...beautiful. Everything seems to symbolize something in it that fits into the story perfectly. Great job.

This is amazingly good and it deserves far more reviews than it has. It was just brilliant, going on my faves

I loved this.

Cute story!

Gah, your way with words is frustratingly inspiring

Love love love your style, I must say.