Good fanfic but you made elrond seem a bit too evil. He is supposed to be wise and kind

I thought it was great!romantic but clean.keep em comin :)

I liked it! Do a sequel! PRETTY PLEASE?

Yes I'm reviewing! And I thought it was good. I think that putting it into the first person, and being Arwen, made it better. I also like the refernce to the other story. And the frustration in the last chapter. The talking with Aragorn was good and made it a little suspence full. But it also kept me wanting to read, which is a good thing.

Hector: I liked it too!

Told you he would be here.

~Lariren

I love this story!(and Aragorn, obviously)

MUST...HAVE ...SEQUAL! Come on, don't leave us hanging! What happens next?

Time to kill Elrond! That was so mean. I hope she sneaks out to see him.

YEs! SEQUAL! PLEAZE! *is crazed by the obsession of your fics* umm... yeah..

Oh! Yay for rebellion! *To next chapter!*

Ohh! Poor Arwen!! Aww... *runs to read next chapter*

dude i can finally go on the computer again! Anywat i think you should do a sequel. i liked the ending anyway. well gotta go

You're ending it there?! *sniff* no! Well, other than you're ending it I thought it was great. I love Arwen/Aragorn Fluff (btw, you did great for a first attempt :-) ). Can't Wait for 'Damaged Dining Halls and Ale Adventures'!

Very nice! I will definitely look for your next story!
Oh, that's fine! You can e-mail me if you want, to let me know what you think about my stories - feel free to go right ahead!
:) Cerridwen

Get on your computer right now and write the sequel...THEY MUST MEET IN LOTHLORIEN!
It would be lovely and fluffy and it would make me very happy.
That was a lovely story, I really enjoyed that.
Now write that sequel, do it as a favour to me.
x

Hey!
this was a very cute fic, awesome job! A sequal would be nice, but don't stress about it! See ya around, bye!