I wonder what Hikaru would think to this...

Well written! Fun read!

Okay, WOW, now THIS was gorgeous! I love how you made Akira describe how Hikaru fits with Sai's and his own style... VERY nice.

aw! kawaii desu! so adorable! it was so fluffy and sweet and cute!

Aww, that was just too cute. Fluffy; I love it. You should do one in Shindou's POV.

Aww... Akira's so... I dunno.

Tear-jerker! Love HnG...
Reminds me of Haku, now...

*_* Ahh... wonderful! I loved this very much. It seems to flow so well- AKira's thought are very natural and well written. It's amazing how you capture Akira's thoughts so succintly.
I especially liked the last line:
"And I intend to see you look at me that way forever."
It was a good conclusion to the entire piece. Beautifully written! I really enjoyed this.

haha
very short but effective
and i love the impact of the last 2 lines

Hehe, I was reading through this, and, approaching the end, I thought, 'Where's the shounen ai?' and then BAM! Last line, there it was. _ Vury nice!

I LOVE YOUR FIC! It was great...