This is a fabulous plot! Fantastic read. Love the ENT crew chemistry. Post at Warp 5 archive? The R/S shippers will love you.

*chants* Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Please *puppy eyes*

I hate that kind of ending... far too sappy and predictable for my taste. Anyways, a sequel would be good, and perhaps you could have those two begin to forge some kind of a new relationship together, now that Malcolm knows about his past, and they don't have to worry about crazy psycho intelligence-types. Am I making any kind of sense? Either way, well done on this and hey-ho to a follow-up ;)
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TLI

Ok ...
That was very ... anticlimactic and very unresolved.
We have enough of that on the actual series and as for them working together well usually one or the other leaves as it becomes too uncomfortable for them or they realise they still love esch other.
either way this should go at least one more chapter to resolve this open ended finale.
That is unless the author did this on purpose, in which case it is very dissappointing.
dennisud

Hey hey, a u-turn and finally things seem to be heading back to the relatively straight and narrow ^^
But, knowing you, that ain't gonna last for long, hmm? Which leaves me in the old position of waiting for the next chapter...
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TLI

Very nice, I like how its continuing. Its a very good AU story as I can easily see Malcolm working as a secret agent. *sings* Secret- agent man!

Good Lord, Malcolm just ain't gettin' any respite, is he? Flip... *grin* I like this. In fact, I really like this. Keep it comin'!
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TLI

*sputters, brain explodes* WHAT?!?!?! NO! Oh, someone needs to clear this up! I am so confused! Please finish! I beg you!

I'd go on and on about the injustice of what's happening to Malcolm, but quite frankly I do not have the energy, so I will rant at you from the depths of my mind (!), and hope that you get another chapter up soon :)
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TLI

Awesome story line! Intersting in every chapter.

OH OH OH! I knew it! YESIAMAWESOME! Very suspenseful, please update soon, before my head asplodes!

Couple of things. One... WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON THERE! YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!
Two... Jon called Hoshi 'Ensign' again.
Aside from that, you gotta update soon... I refuse to demean myself by begging, but will yelling work??
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TLI

I sense fireworks ahead... heh... oh boy, when those two meet, poor lil' Malcolm's gonna be caught in the middle, hmm??
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TLI

What?! NO! Oh, wait, is she a traitor, is that why the mission went wrong and Malcolm is afraid of her in his dreams?

What I'm anticipating here is not just Mal's meeting with his "Wife" but of how she's going to take the news about Hoishi!
Should be "a humdinger" as Trip might say!
dennisud