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| solfire 2007-12-26 ch 2, | abuseAw. This was absolutely adorable! I love Izumo and Kotetsu. They definately don't get enough air time, lol. I loved the parallel paragraphs in the second chapter, It lent itself very well to the story :D |
| shiruru 2006-09-30 ch 2, | abuseI still really love this piece. They're beautifully written and very real and natural. I read it every now and then just because and I realized I'd never reviewed it. I like it and I wanted to say thanks for writing it. |
| Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuse... *blushes*... That was cute. And encouraging, as I am writing a fanfiction of my own about them... yay. |
| Kittengrl39 2005-12-17 ch 2, | abuseI love you. *glomps* (won't say anymore because that would spoil it) |
| Red Crow 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved this one too. Never going to be able to look at I and K without going "aw". |
| Bunny 2004-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI luv your fics and this one is no exception! ^^ Ps: according to the offical character guide you right it is Koteshi. ^^ |
| Ivy Adrena 2004-09-09 ch 2, | abuseo_o I am officially in LOVE with this pairing. It always made me happy when these two came on screen, and I almost melted when I read this fic. So sweet! I don't think I've ever seen an author pull off the double paragraph structure before, but you did it beautifully. |
| Renn 2004-06-22 ch 2, | abusewow! this is a favourite! wow! it's just so great! |
| Renn 2004-06-22 ch 1, | abusewow wow wow. so cool... |
| tactless tactics 2004-06-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love smut. |
| tactless tactics 2004-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAah! I love Izumo and Koteshi. Love them. Good fic... Izumo is the one with the weird chin thingy, and Koteshi has the giant kunai and bandages, right? |
| Keo Siph 2004-04-16 ch 1, | abuseNo one's really gotten Izumo before... Alright, let me check something... Yes, someone's spelled it correctly, but no one's said it... By INANE, the spikey-haired chuunin examiner's name is Kotetsu. Close, though. Doesn't come up in search, though. Alright, back to fic... Izumo when from totally in-character to over-bearing mother/Hayate-sick/Anne-the-orphan sort. As soon as you went to his memories, it lost the touch. It still had a point, but it wasn't what you were leading up to in the first few paragraphs. The insomnia's not a bad thing, but the whole sob-past is a bit awkward. Love it, though. |
| miraphora 2004-03-26 ch 2, anon. | abusebecause no fangirl is a *true* stalker until she's left reviews in person and at the source... Like I told you, I'm astounded to have finally found a fic for this pairing (and their names, for that matter, because they're never said in the anime, not even so that they were missubtitled as pronouns--ohyes i checked). I wanted them together as soon as I'd seen them--they were cute, they had this unspoken form of communication, they stoodtooclose! I love Naruto for its bit characters as much as for its main characters. Everyone has this...aura that comes off, even when they lack substantial back-story. This little fic-set is *great*...and of course I glee at you and love upon you muchly for your writing! The parallel style of this is particularly interesting, the way they each see the thoughts cross each others' eyes and neither acts on it except to avoid. And the back-story you've created for them is excellently crafted. Having not read the manga at all (I'm trying not to spoil myself for the anime...and then I go read fanfic...), I would have totally believed this was official if not for your disclaimer (all of which I read, btw ^^ because I do things like that). I definitely wouldn't be disappointed to see more of the pairing from you. Though, as usual, SR logs are accepted compensation/appeasement for my rabid fangirl soul... ::grin:: |
| chloe`chloe 2004-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abuselovely fic >.< yay for minor characters in animanga universe! and yay for Sunfreak ^^ ooh.. such an unimportant review... |
| Nienna 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have never actually written this is a review before, and I know it sounds trite, but please, please write more of this pair! I love the way you have given these two so much character and complexity. How do you take such strange couples and make them work so well? Not that this is a weird pairing, but how did you even connect Shikamaru and Asuma? Anyway, you couples seem so natural eventhough I would never have pictured them together. I'm ashamed to admit that I have been thinking about your pairings at the oddest times, like in the middle of a quiz or during lunch or on my way to the gym. Your writing style is addictive! I'm hooked! Please feed me more! |