wow. this was quietly amazing. plus, love the e.e. cummings line - that man had a way with words, and so do you. :)

That's a good drinking buddy right there :D

Orochimaru, although I despise him, I can understand how the darkness was swallowing him whole and nobody was there for him. I like the contrast you did between him and Sasuke, between Tsunade and Sakura.

Its brilliantly done n I love it. Now if u excuse me, imma go read more of ur stufff :D

Wow. Just wow.

loved this story. )

*so emotional*

This is awesome! I loved it!

That was brilliant.

Love. I also like the multitude of possibilities - because while I love a happy ending, a totally free and clear happy ending for Tsunade and Jiraiya doesn't seem quite right. Not all the time, anyway. Thank you (even if this story is years old).

That went beyond epic boundries.:)

beautiful story, loved the ending

Woh. Goosebumps man.

Beautiful. It's always fascinating to think of millions of our lives existing in different universes, with a major changing event not occurring that changes the rest of that life. But the poignancy of the ending is that even with all the tragedy in her life, Tsunade still believes that good can come in the one she has.

this was amazing...it was i dont know but it was perfect and sad and happy all at once it was everything. i love it

I realy liked the story so far, that i've decidet to translate it. here you can see it in russian)

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Interesting writing style used here. I like the experimentation and new flow based on ongoing thought, regrets, hopes, and realities. The brisk changes help give the sense that time is going by too fast for Tsunade to linger on one particular thing too long.

I feel slightly addicted to your stories...but still, there are worse things to read obsessively.

And your writing is beautiful no matter how many times I re-read.

Thank you