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You Know 2007-05-14 . chapter 1
Morbid, and a bit unrealistic, but what else could be expected of an angsty teen? On to the review.

You go into a lot of detail, with the death scene and the self-mutilation scenes, and that actually pulled me into the stories. If I can get into a story, I'll like it a lot more. There were some errors in grammar and tenses, but you're foreign, so it's okay. I'll let you slide.

I like them overall, especially because I feel like you put a lot of your own emotions and feelings into them, which is always a good thing. Bottling is bad.

How about a long stretch of highway, eh? Eh? Eh?
dark-girl-faith-sidle 2005-09-15 . chapter 3
a paige we never known
kaytee83 2005-09-04 . chapter 3
Crass, unsubstantial, illogical and unconvincing.
Melissa 2005-09-03 . chapter 3
Well written, very visual and believable. I don't ussually read the fics like this, but I love your writting style! Wether it's this story or not, i'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Pat 2005-09-02 . chapter 3
Well what can I say? It's honest and true and I guess I'm proud of you for it. You should stop waiting until you're anxious and down to write though. Write me something happy prissy missy.
Chadwick 2005-09-02 . chapter 2
Ew, Mari. That's way too morbid for me, but here's my review.

P.S. I love Paige.
Doreena 2005-02-14 . chapter 1
I'm sorry but that was disgusting. Distrubing and not in a good way. I really think you should have more of a warning on there for folks that don't like that sort of think. It's more considerate. Just something in the description like "Graphic Description of Violence".
Succubus-69 2004-09-30 . chapter 2
Holy-moly. This is so gruesome! I love it! I was like cringing the whole way through! Great description!! Very, very good!!
red 2 2004-09-20 . chapter 2
wow just...wow you really need to continue this story soon.
GothCatholic 2004-09-02 . chapter 2
i like Paige i realy do. but since she replaced Prue and Prue was and always will be my favorite charmed one i'm likeing this story.
kit 2004-09-02 . chapter 2
Though sometimes, true, I wonder if there is any hope for you at all.
cindy 2004-04-29 . chapter 1
hi its me again..i reviewed this a lil while back, and i realised my review wasn't in very good detail...so here i am to tell you that this is so gross! AW I love gruesome fics!! Well, i reckon you should update and make into an actaul story! Once again...EXCELLENT!! I think this review is better than the one i wrote before..
kaytee83 2004-04-06 . chapter 1
That's my girl.
paige fan 2004-04-06 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD! ok, i've only just discovered this story. aarrgh! it's horrible! she's horrible! oh my god! ok, i'll shut up now. it was gd, r u gunna update it? argh, i can't believe that! ok, so it's only a story... i'm embarrassing myself now. plz update this, i have to know what's going to happen!
cindy 2004-01-23 . chapter 1
WTF!
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