i like that. i've read a few stories where shikamaru doesn't want to do anything because he's lazy. i like that you translated his laziness into a strategy because that's what it's always seemed like to me. i enjoyed your story.

XD

This is well done.

It's really good one-shot. I liked the bit about the stadium. In fact I liked lots of it.

In particular the line 'Becuase he's smart enough to know how to be stupid.'

I think it sums up Shikamaru perfectly. ANd you should really write a sequel or something. Becuase this is brilliant.

O_O That was super amazing! So short yet...O_O _

Heh. I keep bookmarking stuff from you, and then I go back through and realize that I should just bookmark your bio page. Dur.

Anyway, I love your Neji/Shikamaru. All of it. And you're starting to corrupt me into Kiba/Shino, when I'm normally fairly against pairings within teams. Your characterization is utterly amazing, and I just love the way you write. 'Specially my personal favorite, Kid Nara.

Of course, another addiction is the last thing I need right now. But consider yourself fangirled.

Nice.

Adorable. A nice quick read... I would personally like more from you. I like how you write. Not demanding. Just suggesting. Ja.

Great I love the end...

Interesting pairing, but it kinda works. Very good description of character.

why does this pairing tempt u? it is completely understandable. another brilliant fic. man, u rule.

Can you say sugoi?

I like the haracter analysis...and I like the quotes that you put at the end of your stories

...Excellent ending line. Shikamaru's description perfect, so totally him. He's been getting too much worship, when in reality he really IS a punk ;D