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| RedBrunja 2008-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseIt's hard to do humor with Neji without it being ooc, but most of this works. |
| Kyoshi7989 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG this is so funny :D You are a genius, you know that? XD |
| Haruka-Hime 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is well done. |
| Savannah 2008-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseyayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay! |
| kibagaaralover18 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is funny and romantic in a off-handish kind of way. |
| LianFex 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseCute and wonderful. I loved it. Especially this part: 'Naruto-kun- he's a bit flaky but I bet he'd be a great dad' and I don't know why. >_< Great job! ~Lian |
| a malachite maiden 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWhoo! Aww... It's cute! And... not sad! And... happy! And... I'm being redundant but it doesn't matter because Lee getting some [what, I wonder?] makes me very happy and joyful and excited and... yay! |
| Silver Ink Pot 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really liked it!! It was super funny, and romantic and cute in the right parts, oh and the ending was wonderful! It was a beautiful story!! |
| The Yukikage 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseAre they from West Virgina? |
| Kay 2007-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the story. You could do one where Henata and Naruto get together and make Sasuke jeolous. I would write it my self but I am not a great writer. I prefer to do the art stuff. |
| amber wheeler 2007-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so wrong i mean, theyre cosins 4 crying out loud |
| angeville 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusei share your opinion. love your style, and i love the creepyness of the alternate pairings (well, i AM a fan of NejiHina)! it's hilarious, it's fresh, and i screamed "Holy **!" several times during the reading..! I'm sorry to say this, but you were totally faved* ;) |
| Xweleona 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! very reaslistic, it was wonderful to see neji completely surprised and embarassed, and Lee reacted just as I thought he would. You kept true to everyone's character, congrats! |
| XxStorms-Away.LovexX 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseNow, I mean this is a good way, but that was...creepy. I'm not a big supporter of NejiHina incest, but this one was okay. I am, however, a big supporter of LeeTen, and that pairing will RILE THE WORLD Muhuahahaha...*clears throat* sorry. It was well-written, and fairly IC. I suppose...it will have to go to my favourites list! |
| ianna 2007-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT IT'S SUPER GEART! |