Very creative and suspenseful story. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Got so behind that I ended up printing this off to read and, as usual, it was a pleasure. You capture the characters and emotions so well and mix that with exciting and interesting plot lines. So thanks for another wonderful story.
Judith

Liked this a lot.Gold star!

A lovely and very enjoyable story! I liked the different take on the amnesia, and the ending was very sweet. I do love those Mark/Steve emotional moments :) Always love to see new stories from you and I hope you have another in the works that will be appearing soon!

Writer JC...I've reread this story many times since you've posted it here. The connection and angst between both Steve and Mark are very good and I love how you go back and forth between them in there thoughts and thier final reconnection. Very, very sweet.

Aw. What a sweet ending. I just loved Steve's words and reactions. The need for closeness and anxiety about a possible relapse were exactly what I would expect if he had been through what you wrote for him.

Sigh. What a wonderful way to finish the story. I can just imagine the embrace being both awkward and beautiful. Even though it was my second time through for the story I still enjoyed it tremendously.

Aw! What a great story. I'm so glad you posted it here. Hope you've got something else up your sleeve too!

This was a lovely ending to a great story. The tension in the chase scene contrasted nicely with the feelings at the end.
I hope that there will be more stories soon.
Tracy

Thank you for updating, this was a great chapter.

Oh, what a beautiful, beautiful poignant chapter. I just the story was 10 times longer than you said it was!

That's an interesting place to leave his amnesia. He knows who he is but not what he's become. Great idea.

How horrible to have to relive the grief over a parents death and how horrible for Mark to have Steve so close and yet so far away.

I am really enjoying this story. You've captured Steve's confusion and Mark's concern perfectly. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until the next chapter!!

Another good chapter, the way that gradually Steve is getting glimpses into his past is done very well. I love the way that the bikers call him Mick, somehow it just doesn't fit him at all does it?
Tracy