What did I just have the misfortune to read?
My eyes... they burn!

No, no, no no no, no, nope, no way, nada, no!
NO!

Get rid of this filth, please. The world's problems are already hard enough without this drivel existing.

What's with the long song lyrics and lack of punctuation? Use spell check and stop plagarising songs, and you might have something worth reading. It's doubtful, but hey, you never know.

Was this supposed to be a paraody? TURN ON YOUR GRAMMAR CHECK.

darn it didnt send white dove tree at gmail dot com. e mail me please...

poor arty... but then, id be a hipocrite.. i wants your e mail please! mine is if you could send me something, i would really appriciate it. i have something i want to tell you regarding artys annoying cousin damien. dont worry, its good, i just need your permission for it... im a big fan of arty hes my favorite character and im obsessed too... YAY ARTY PLEASE PICK ME! oops... um, just, um, e mail me please... *runs away quickly in case youre mad...*

rotfl! LMFAO! i knew it!

I think it would've been a whole lot better if you described it more.. because that IS funny xD Wonder why the girls would want to be with Arty though.. and Holly appears in a public area? x_x I admit, the idea is good and all, but the details aren't really good at all :/ I still iked it though (:

heya! this is donkey i read ya bio its funny and all, but a bit hard to read. mind putting in some spaces? hey guess what.. its 7:07 mornin, but i been up since 5:30 cause i couldnt sleep. 5:30 on the holidays?!?

[does luke skywalker pose] no

^^ can i change one bit in the bio? insted of pink bunny or whatever attacking draco, hows about i scruff up his hair? cause i always wanted to scruff the malfoys hair :) can i can i can i? ill see it if you change it.. woah, lookit my huge review.. oh well, ill end it with this:

[luke skywalker pose again]
no [gasps coughs up some blood and dies] [see through spirit thingy rises up outta corpse]

spirit; [in tiny squeaky voice] im free!! mwahahaa! now, off to hell! [starts rising up] what the heck?? im meant to be going down! down i tell you! no.. [gets too high up to hear]

Hahahahahahahaha. Dude.

hey ya..hey ya..oh sorry*turns down her radio* i was having fun STOP LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT SO WOT I WAS DANCING!! yu make me sad..wha ;_; wot was the point of this? oh yah im making a new story! its beyblade zeo falls in love with ozuma no its not a gay fic zeo turns out to be a girl so its okay and it explains zeo's hair thats so long it goes down to his ass! yay its a win/win situation! uk i think miss jarvie has too much influence on me..stoopid win/win situation crap..

looks funny. Continue.

this is good. Did you read "the wish list"?

Aw, this is cute. I like how only Steph looked in the library. Smarty pants huh? Hehehe you could do a lot with this. It could even get violent. . .
Oh, a suggestion: When you're doing that dot dot dot thingy, you should either space out the dots or put nine dots. Otherwise it only comes up with one dot.

Why would they want to go out with Artemis? He is so cold and heartless. Even if he did change from the beginning he had the mind wipe. Or would his father have influence?

Well, to get right on it, our story's kinda simple and short, but boy is it hilarious! Man, sometimes whenever I read the books I just wish that Holly would get her teensy wittle revenge on him, and, well, here it is! Keep it up! Make more hilarious stories! Give Root a facial! Or don't!