this is a sad story. update soon!

i have a very big, and hairy **. i wish donna and jackie would suck it

That was so sad, I am almost crying. Never have I read a story that has hit me like that. Excellent work and keep writing stories. You have a great gift.

This is so sad:( I swear, I actually started crying, I not until now have I been able to stop. Good plot, but it's a real downer.

Beautiful... and heartbreaking. But, beautiful anyway. I love your writing style. It's unique and magnificent. Like I said... beautiful. ^.^

God... that was SO GOOD!

awesome.

What a strong story! I was surprised at how quickly it flowed. The characters seemed quite real (sign of a good writer :) and it left me speechless--although, as you can see, I'm not *that* speechless. Thanks,
jenben

Damn! That was amazing! I loved it, please keep writing youve got talent.