Here ends my longing for you, Masaki Tenchi.

That line is beautifully dignified, like the princess she is. Nicely written.

This story was fantastic. It was very realistic, very in-character.

I really liked this. XD

i love the words, but the style resembles more of a play, which i hate reading because the lines almost read too simplistic... however, i loved the words. i loved all of it.

wow.. this so sweet.. i love this.. i almost cried when i read it.

Lovely work! That style of writing, a play form, is often hard to pull off, but you did it wonderfully. This is a great peice of work, keep writing.

WOW very nice, it was sweet, i liked it it was great, I'm glad Ayeka can move on with her life even thogh I'm not her biggest fan but shes still cool.
well bye bye