This is good and all, but there are quite some words misspelled and misspaced (is there are word? but you know what i mean, right?). If you have time, please correct them. Thank you.

This would be signed, but I'm at school, and my teacher is staring at me *waves hi to teacher* *gulps* I should be doing a history project, but I'm reviewing this instead. Great story, as always, thanks for the happy birthday, and if I don't stop, I'll be dead, so bye!

waaaaah...*sniff*..ohh, Jyou-saaan...;_;

That was a great story! I'm in tears! Poor Joe. Well I hope that you write more. Especially about Joe.

SO sad...yet it was a great story keep it up!

Good story. I really liked it; touching...I like Jim a lot. Good job.