*tosses a pair of socks to gyuumajo* eat my socks!
hehehe! it's cute! really... i wouldn't mind that you put me in. it's okay. i love it!

Great story idea! Very clever ;) I do think perhaps there could have been some more building up of tension till the big kiss, but we all have to start somewhere, right? Overall it was easy to read, interesting to discover what would happen next, and your interlude was brilliant!