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| AnimeNerd1 2008-04-16 ch 3,  | abuseAwsome compleatly awsome well not much else to say but good job. |
| speaker4thesilent 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseQuite possibly the best Inuyasha fic I've read in the past year. I don't suppose that there's a short story out there about Kagome, Inuyasha, and their brood showing up at the modern version of the Higurashi Shrine? Or for that matter a sequel of some sort to this? After all the sequels I've read to bad stories it'd be great to read a good one. |
| speaker4thesilent 2008-02-28 ch 2, | abuseGood so far. Only one thing, old style Japanese traditions (and since we're talking about the Warring States Era I think it counts) state that if an unmarried couple spends three night together without a chaperone then they are legally married. I think by the beginning of this chapter that they had spent those three nights together. Of course, Inuyasha might not have remembered it or, for that matter, given the state of his education he might have never learned it. Just thought that you should know before somebody decided to get rude about it. |
| haipa-chan 2008-02-23 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely loved this story. Can;t think of much to say exept that it was awsome. ^_^ ♥ |
| KittyKaiya 2007-11-09 ch 3, | abuseAnother amazing, you truly are gifted Mouse. |
| Tasogare Tenshi 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseWOOT!! |
| Elfin Flame 2007-09-26 ch 3, | abusei was a little confused by the ending, but i caught on. That's so kaiwai! (i think i spelled that right)anyway, this is an awesome story and i love it to death! Sayonara! |
| Elfin Flame 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseomg, im so glad i found tyhis. I read this story a long time ago...well actually only half of the first chappie. But it was when i ddin't have an account so i couldn't put it on my favs. I tried to find it for like, ever. But i never could. The, i just randomely found it~ this is like, my fav sotry ever. I'm gona read it all over again~ Love this story so much! |
| Rokushin 2007-09-07 ch 3, | abuseThis was a great story. I am so glad I stumbled upon it (I do love being able to see what stories other authors have marked as favorites). Possibly it needs either a more obvious distinction when the scene shifts, or to be broken into chapters as opposed to three parts. But that is purely cosmetic. I hope to read more by you two authors, and if not, well this work was awesome. |
| etturtle 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseah... I have finally resigned myself to registering... Only cause I wanted to leave you a review. This story is one of my favorites so far. You have a great talent in writing and captured my attention from the get go. I absolutly LOVE how you captured the characters. The romace was VERY well written and thought through. I did not see any loose ends and was not left wanting at the end. Spectacular job and fantastic story! Keep it up! |
| The Fluffy Muffin Queen 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abuseOh... That was so sweet! And really good! I loved it! |
| koinu50 2007-03-26 ch 2, | abuseWhen i read this story before there were lemons in it. did you delete it? can you send the one with the lemon in it to me please |
| KoRnChildG 2007-03-22 ch 3, | abusejust so you know, i stayed up until 3am to finish reading your story. it was so long! but i enjoyed reading every minute of it! |
| KoRnChildG 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abusei love it! |
| BladesoftheValkyrie 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was an insanely long chapter. I really love the content, but the random Japanese is slightly annoying. I would much rather read in English, except for the terms that don't have an exact translation. You might also want to consider finding some way to break up the scene changes, because the transition is slightly confusing. Other than that, I like how this story is progressing - keep up the great work! ^_^ |