i think that your off to a good start but that you could add a little more depth and description to your writing...! Great writing, keep it up!

this is beatiful, i love the whole, mashed up thoughts bits and pieces everywhere thing, few people can do that well but you have this is great !

wow. That's really cool. I love the Jess/Tony friendship and it's a great way to go inside Jess' head during that point. I always thought that was one of the most poignant parts of the movie!

aww! very touching and simply sweet!

Good. I like it! You're pretty good at drabble.

(crying hysterically) That's cute. Very creative and sweet.

Oh, that's so sweet! I love this rather short fic!

this is a wicked idea for a story and i really enjoyed reading it

Thank you so much! Finally there's a BilB fic. Awesome, keep it up.

that was nice.
I have waited for anything BILB related for a while now

Aww! So sweet! Good job!

Very short, but also very sweet. In some ways, too sweet. But I still liked it.

short,, but oh so sweet

This is so sweet and simple. Well done.

*tear, tear*
How sweet!