 Amandafreak 2005-11-29 . chapter 1 Atually I kinda agree with you on this. Sonic could use everyone like a puppet. BUT one thing is that sonic never trys to use them, it just comes naturally. Like tails just comes cuz sonic's his best buddy, Sonic doesnt try to use him. and also, I dont think Sonic thinks. |
 ShadowEver 2004-01-22 . chapter 1Yet another story to review, yay.
Story:4 A good stemmed through, and thorough, yet colorful fic. It relates to Sonic, as wanted seems, and the story seems to unfold properly. Good job, no errors.
Plot:5 Suitable, and enjoyable. A bit scratchy here, and ther (in other words, try using metaphoric expressions if possible) Cool.
character(s):4 No characters voice was submitted, so I'll mark on the narrator. Good start off point, you jumped right on the character Sonic, as needed.
wording:3 Hmm, I'm not saying this is blankly insipid, but this could use some upgraded words, and indeed, another word choice of use.
overall:4/5 Between that area, which is good! Keep the work up, I hope this story goes smooth for you. In other words, yes, I was entertained! :)
~*~Shadow4ever~*~ |
 Valon Sergki 2004-01-22 . chapter 2Wow, I wish I could write in character like that, Very good, My theory is correct then, Sonic does like Amy chasing him, all pieces of a big puzzle that is Sonic. Good job. |