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Flicker's Owner 2007-08-13 . chapter 1
You know what? This is the best sonamy fic i ever read. I meant it, you capture Sonic's personality perfectly as if i actually talking to him! and all of theories he gave...so alike that blue boy. I'm amazed...
Amandafreak 2005-11-29 . chapter 2
AH! Sonic's not that evil! I dont know why Sonic runs away from Ames but he doesnt do that cuz he wants to play with Amy! Call me crazy but I think he actually loves her!
Amandafreak 2005-11-29 . chapter 1
Atually I kinda agree with you on this. Sonic could use everyone like a puppet. BUT one thing is that sonic never trys to use them, it just comes naturally. Like tails just comes cuz sonic's his best buddy, Sonic doesnt try to use him. and also, I dont think Sonic thinks.
Espio 2004-04-10 . chapter 2
O_O never would have expected it. make more chappies. 4 out of 5
Marosa 2004-01-24 . chapter 1
O.O Wow, your talent to write in character personality is immense...great work! ^-^
SSJ Sonic 2004-01-22 . chapter 2
Wow. What a nice story. It sounds like Sonic too. This was great! Very nice indeed.
(disappears)
Neyuki Tenshi 2004-01-22 . chapter 2
Wow... that was really good. Poor Amy. ...Dear god, may I never utter those two words again...
ShadowEver 2004-01-22 . chapter 1
Yet another story to review, yay.
Story:4 A good stemmed through, and thorough, yet colorful fic. It relates to Sonic, as wanted seems, and the story seems to unfold properly. Good job, no errors.
Plot:5 Suitable, and enjoyable. A bit scratchy here, and ther (in other words, try using metaphoric expressions if possible) Cool.
character(s):4 No characters voice was submitted, so I'll mark on the narrator. Good start off point, you jumped right on the character Sonic, as needed.
wording:3 Hmm, I'm not saying this is blankly insipid, but this could use some upgraded words, and indeed, another word choice of use.
overall:4/5 Between that area, which is good! Keep the work up, I hope this story goes smooth for you. In other words, yes, I was entertained! :)
~*~Shadow4ever~*~
Valon Sergki 2004-01-22 . chapter 2
Wow, I wish I could write in character like that, Very good, My theory is correct then, Sonic does like Amy chasing him, all pieces of a big puzzle that is Sonic. Good job.
Catachresis 2004-01-20 . chapter 1
A nice first person, sounds just like Sonic. Very interesting.
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