You know, Ed isn't that stupid -.-' *aspirated sigh* He may be a short, blond, impatient idiot but he isn't stupid. But still good job.

How Romeo-and-Juliet-esque. XD

T_T

wow, interesting... so short, and thanks to that- hilarious. BANG. suicide.

Has potential! Don't kill ED!! Then I'd have to kill you! I couldn't even kill Ed in my fanfic. No one can kill Ed! But seriously, write more. You snagged my attention really bad.

Uhh... I don't get it. It's too vague if you haven't watched the series to episode 15. Even then... What the Hell happened? So, was Ed's arm shattered (the fragments) and then he was shot? Or were the metal fragments Al?

Oh my God, that is evil! I was laughing so hard; that was great!

Ah! How did I know that you were going to do that? I read the first one and thought, "Wouldn't it be ironic if..." You be Evil. I find the Romeo and Juliet-iness of this amusing.

WOAH o.0 Talk about evil!
Watch as Ed survives the shot but Al suicides first @w@;

:o oddly enough it's what I'd really like to see...

*grips the paper fan tightly... growls*
Oi! That was just horrible! Especially the second chapter.
Evil on your part... and Evil on mine for chuckling sadisticly at it. *thwaps herself*

Both versions are absolutely heartbreaking. That's not very easy to accomplish with 13-15 short paragraphs. Nice job!
*points to the brand new Full Metal Alchemist section. Better move this so more people can read it. ^^

T-T Bah. What're you talking about? They're both evil! Not to say they wern't awesome, just evil. As if the series didn't make me sulk enough. *crawls away to a dark little corner and cries*

*stares*
This is very depressing...I've already cried rivers during the original show...but...Ed!